Poetry Week

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9 Responses to Poetry Week

  1. Morgan says:

    I like the poem and when I get home I’ll make one up

  2. laveg says:

    I love this poem mostly because it has suspence and creepynes and also is very catchy By Billy&George

  3. shotr says:

    Ronnie here, I think that the poem is about a evil looking but friendly monster that just wants some friends but the citizen’s think otherwise.I like the the part when the citizens became friends with the Malfecenses. It was such a nice thing to do.
    The thing that made it so effective was the expression and the impact was the thing that made the poem so effective.

  4. akila says:

    I like the poem because it was very mysterious and it had lots of mixed feelings.

    Aylin

  5. passb says:

    I think that it is about if you be kind people will be kind to you back

    I like how you have to use expression in every word

    I thought that our actions made it effective

    Ben

  6. sudha says:

    These are the answers to the 3 questions:
    1. The poem was about a creature called the ‘Malfeasance.’ It dissolved due to kindness.
    2. I like it because the Malfeasance did no harm to the people (despite wrecking the city).
    3. The expression was POWERFUL so it was effective.

  7. Sarah says:

    This poem has steadily become one of my favourites! The words are so meaningful, and, if you think deeply, it has a story behind it. It tells you that if you play your act of kindness, you will most likely receive it back. Even the smallest act of kindness can definitely brighten up someone’s day. Also, as powerful as the words in this poem are, it’s not the only thing that can give impact to the poem. This poem is perfect for lots and lots of expression, and expression always makes everything more exciting!

    – Sarah

  8. Keira says:

    I think these are the three answers to the questions:
    1) Maybe the poem is a metaphor, like a tall person that was clumsy and the poet didn’t like!
    2) I like the poem because when you add impact, it sounds effective, which make me think it’s almost reality!
    Finally, number three!
    3) I think that when we preformed it, the expression, impact and tone made it sound so effective and can really help the reader or listener get a clear image in their head, like it did for me!

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