hi berna I really like your poem and the best part about your poem is it rhymes I especially like the part when you talk about friends because your trying to make people become friends and I bet you have lots and lots of friends. your poem is outstanding keep up the great work.
hi berna I really like your poem and the best part about your poem is it rhymes I especially like the part when you talk about friends because your trying to make people become friends and I bet you have lots and lots of friends. your poem is outstanding keep up the great work.
By Amy tanzanite
I liked the poam because it was very long and it was very fun.