Well done Mae you have expressed your feelings . What I really like about your work is when you wrote ” Even though Miranda, thinks this thing is a creature she also thinks that the thing is trying to help her in a way”. I really like it because you are writing your thoughts and feelings and what you think she is feeling. This is a really good sentence I should of written it in my book (I think that Miranda is feeling happy and exited because she has just seen a real creature).Mae I am glad that Miss G put your work on the blog because you will receive lots of good comments well done I am glad .
Well done Mae you have expressed your feelings . What I really like about your work is when you wrote ” Even though Miranda, thinks this thing is a creature she also thinks that the thing is trying to help her in a way”. I really like it because you are writing your thoughts and feelings and what you think she is feeling. This is a really good sentence I should of written it in my book (I think that Miranda is feeling happy and exited because she has just seen a real creature).Mae I am glad that Miss G put your work on the blog because you will receive lots of good comments well done I am glad .
I don’t like the part of the picture where the lady Henrietta is very tall because the page looks smaller then he actually is.
Thank you Juliana, I really liked the painting and the story that the painting tells us.